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WIP Changing AKA Sexy Abs 2 by ~Spork-:iconSpork-:

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This is a cleaned up version of what I am working on right now. All help is appreciated, critique away ^^

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~jetsco Oct 22, 2008, 2:42:50 PM
Much much better :D

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C&C can kill... But I love it!
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~Spork- Oct 22, 2008, 9:01:26 PM
thanks

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People don't choose evil because it is evil; they merely mistake it for happiness, the good they seek.
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~platinaoi Oct 25, 2008, 9:20:35 AM
I think it's a bit ... weird, especially the chest. The left part should be flatter. I don't understand anything that's happening with the face, we don't see the expresion as well as we should . And I think there's not enough shadows and lights.
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~Spork- Oct 25, 2008, 6:37:30 PM
It is not done yet, and I have not even begun to shade or at lights yet. I also have yet to work on the face. That is just a flat sketch. I was more asking if the anatomy looked right.

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People don't choose evil because it is evil; they merely mistake it for happiness, the good they seek.
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~platinaoi Oct 25, 2008, 11:12:17 PM
That's what I thought ^^. Except the chest I don't think it looks so bad :D. Maybe the highest part of the abs is weird. I don't think we should see that much the highest line of the abs.

That's all for now :D.
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~Spork- Oct 26, 2008, 12:38:27 PM
I am still kind of confused by what you mean.

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People don't choose evil because it is evil; they merely mistake it for happiness, the good they seek.
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~platinaoi Oct 27, 2008, 1:07:25 PM
Really? oh well I don't know how to say this. I think you should keep it this way :).
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~trumanator500 Nov 1, 2008, 8:54:38 AM
Looks pretty nice so far - as far as critiques, his left arm (his right from our view) needs to have more defined triceps to match the rest of his physique. In other words, instead of an indentation on his upper arm, his triceps should stick out like on his right arm. Also, this is just personal preference, but his package is just a little too well defined, hehe, it attracts unwanted attention to the crotch area, so I would say to simplify it - but once again, just personal preference.
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~SolarFlare57 Nov 21, 2008, 8:51:21 PM
It depends on what Your going for. In a real person the legs might be alittle longer. You would have more of a shoulder and the negitive space would be greater between the arm and the head. For a character it looks good though and proportions can be diffrent from normal.
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